she shimmies out of
her bangles and fringe — strips down
to herself and sleeps
- Comment
- Reblog
-
Subscribe
Subscribed
Already have a WordPress.com account? Log in now.
she shimmies out of
her bangles and fringe — strips down
to herself and sleeps
Well Versed in the News 
OK…I guess I have to admit it! I REALLY like this one. The fact that I’m a guy has nothing to do with it!
🙂 Now, some attempt at a legitimate comment! Love the alliteration and sparkling word choice — shimmies, bangles, and fringe! Really tilts my kilt! Oh, on second thought, I guess another reason I like it is that I’m a guy! And any haiku about a gal stripping down to buck nakedness to go to sleep is going to get my attention. It’s about time someone addressed this subject. Basho, Issa, Buson, and Shiki certainly didn’t go there! *hehe*
Ron
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ron, thanks! I originally imagined a gypsy girl, but really such shimmeryness can represent the adornments worn by any woman (or man for that matter), and how glorious to shake it all off at the end of the day. Perhaps we can find subtle suggestive surprises hidden within the nature observations in the haikus of the masters. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great imagery!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this one! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person