I am sorry I hijacked your original verse by trying to add a continuing verse, but to me a single haiku cries out for a reply.
It is very presumptive of someone to try to add a random thought into someone elses poetry and I apologise for doing so. It is a classic example of “raining on someone else’s parade”!
keyed dots and dashes
converted to notes on staff
singing telegram
(old school love note)
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This may be the best little thing I’ve read all day!
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I am sorry I hijacked your original verse by trying to add a continuing verse, but to me a single haiku cries out for a reply.
It is very presumptive of someone to try to add a random thought into someone elses poetry and I apologise for doing so. It is a classic example of “raining on someone else’s parade”!
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PrairieChat, I loved it! No apologies please, feel free to contribute random thoughts and haiku extensions any time!
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True. Texts and emails are certainly lacking.
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I love the way you give a surprising twist at the end that says it all. 🙂
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Oh yes, bits and bytes
Perfume would be a big plus
To add ambiance
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